On October 25th Jack and Jill were thinking about what they were going to do for the weekend. So they decided to go camping for three weeks in Taranaki, in the woods. when they got there on the first day there suddenly was a Thunderous Storm Heading their way.
Jack and Jill Ran back to there car and drove off to the safe house they were almost there until their car broke down so they had to ask for help but they could not get any bars to call anyone for help. They were really terrified and there hands were shaking like it was freezing cold and they were really worried about what would happen to them because all the trees were falling down so Jack and Jill were frightened so they couldn't go to sleep.
Finally it came to the next day it was terrible for them because trees fell down everywhere and it was messy. They had to walk all the way to the house to ask for help but they saw some people going past on a car so they yelled out “can you help us please” So the person that they ask to help, helped them so they started heading back to Auckland it took them six hours to get back to Auckland and they both said we're never coming back here again.
Hi, My Goal this year is to Finish all My Work On Time. Like Reading, Writing, Maths and Other Work. I also want to me nice to people.
Hi April my name is Henrietta and I go to saint Pius x catholic school In Glenn Innes.
ReplyDeleteI have read your piece of writing that you have posted online and I found it so intresting and good to read from the beginning to end.
Next time I will really like to see alot of more intresting writing and effort to your work.